I think it's still a bit too large in the top, but better than the first pattern I tried. It doesn't have any zipper, though, so it has to have enough ease to slip on. Still, I am thinking of going another size down in the yoke and sleeves area, but keeping the fullness at the hips and below.
Maybe I will wear it to work tomorrow... if I am feeling adventurous in the morning. For now: g'night.